MLGW- A Peace of War

Jun 17, 2011 by

At The Weekend Reader Book Shop in Balch Springs, TX with Client and Author Will Manning talking about his book MLGW – A Peace of War.

Flo Lockett Miles, the owner of the store is asking him questions. Current one: Which stars would play the characters in your book? Need a 20-year-old red head to play the role of Angela Saxon.

Know of any?

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Emma Watson as Angela Saxon?

The final recommendation for the lead character in his book would be Emma Watson, the darling of the Harry Potter movie series.

We think she could be a spirited red-headed Texan fighting in Iraq and saving lives in the physical and spiritual senses.  Guess where she’s headed to after Iraq……

The book also is available on Barnes & Noble’s Website.

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Press Release v. News Release, There Is A Difference

Jun 15, 2011 by

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There are two options in the public relations world: 1) Go with a traditional and expensive PR firm that writes “press releases,” or 2) go with a company that’s focused on delivering “news releases” to reporters that will get attention and increase your odds of making it into a news cycle without winding up with a stack of reprinted press release copies no one read by a traditional and costly PR firm’s interns .

A Press Release

Traditional and expensive PR firms love to write press releases.

Once you approve of a glowing, acronym-laced two or three paragraphs of big words that mean nothing, “innovative, world-class, integrated, one-of-a-kind, first-of-its-kind, cutting-edge;” They add a boilerplate of more of this gibberish; and then they want to put it out on Business Wire for an exorbitant amount; Charge you for writing and publishing, and then at the end of the year; Send you a clip book full of how the same meaningless releases were reprinted verbatim on dozens of Websites neither you nor anyone else in the world have ever visited.

They love to write news releases full of technical jargon: We found this gem the other day:  “Automated Business Process Discovery (ABPD)” Not to mention that AP Style years ago said stop putting acronyms in parenthesis.  And take a look at the Business Wire page on “Submitting A Press Release.” Seriously, you’d think someone at Business Wire would know to write AP Style, too.

A News Release

A news release is an entirely different creature.  (We could add EDC here for the benefit of some and the amusement of others.)

Having the mindset that you are writing and issuing a news release takes your content to an entirely different level.

First of all, you’re focusing on what’s going to get a reporter’s attention, not what is going to get the C Suites’.   A news release includes, wait, it’s coming — NEWS.

Acronyms like ABPD are apparently used by a very small population, so it needs to be included in the release so search engines will find it.  We get that.  But why not try to explain what your software or product does in layman’s words so someone can actually understand it?

If you’re also going to publish a social media release on your site or into circulation, you’re also going to want to include three or four “knock-out, holy cow, I’ve got to get one of these” sub-headlines/bullet points to support your release.

  • Eliminates the need for boring staff meanings using jargon no one understands by 50 percent
  • Does everything automatically, you can spend 35 percent more time at the watercooler
  • Independent firm verifies that new product is 75 times cooler than sliced bread

A news release must have news in it. Just saying it’s going to save time and money doesn’t get it anymore, if it ever really did.

Second of all, it should be written in AP Style as most news organizations worldwide use this agreed upon writing convention.  In journalism classes around America, if you so much as get five stylebook errors in one project, it’s an automatic F.  (Bonus: That means there’s no such thing as a “second annual” anything.)

Third, a news release should be written in pyramid format with the most important information at the top and the least heading toward the end.  This gives an editor/reporter the opportunity to see what you think is most important and decide whether they agree with you or not without having to go on a goose chase.  (Bonus: They get dozens of “press releases” a day, they’re already on a goose chase as it is.  Don’t add to it.)

Fourth, make sure you have a very succinct and attention getting headline on the release.   A headline that says,QPR Software to Offer Business Process Optimization with Automated Business Process Discovery Software QPR ProcessAnalyzer” isn’t going to get the same attention as “Independent Study Shows New Product from Helsinki Company 75 Percent Cooler Than Sliced Bread.”  Maybe not the best example of a rewrite, but it’s more likely to get a reporter’s attention than what was offered to the world in February 2011.

Fifth, while your traditional and expensive PR firm likes to use Business Wire, (They’re not paying for it so why should they worry?) there is nothing in the world better than calling/emailing a reporter and saying in the Subject line of your email: “Do You Like Sliced Bread?  What Till You Hear About This.”

One Last Note About Business Wire

We’re not saying you should not have your news release circulated on Business Wire.  In fact, it has meaningful use if used correctly.  But your odds of what you released being read by more than a traditional and costly PR firm’s interns goes up considerably if you’re writing for reporters and traditional readers and not the white shirts in the C Suite.

To execs at QPR, we think there are much better ways to tell your story than what was done in February 2011.  We’d love to help do that.




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Revision Progression

Jun 12, 2011 by

We’ve spent an inordinate amount of time the past few days revising our site to make it much more colorful and interesting, not to mention robust.

We hope you like the changes and that it increases your excitement about working with Claxton Creative.

Changes still are underway, so please, if you need something, feel free to let us know immediately.  You may call us 365/7 at 972-863-8784 or via Skype at ClaxtonCreative.


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fuzzy test

Jun 10, 2011 by

We just disabled the visual editor under the USER option, and have a plain ole screen.

What happens when we try to set a new paragraph?

The answer was nothing.  Everything still runs together.  Ugh.


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Jun 10, 2011 by

Hello, and thanks for visiting our site.

As we transition, we are testing formatting with the new theme.

Somethings, we’ve seen, in particular, that paragraph returns done previously are not fairing well in the transition.

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Greetings From Huntsville, AL

Jun 1, 2011 by

We’re back again in Huntsville, AL meeting with the company leaders of Digheon Healthcare, Inc.

Much has been done to advance the positioning of our client in the past few weeks.

It’s time for us to begin some new discussions about how to market a medical information company online and in traditional channels.

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